When interviewed about being a poet, Patience Agbabi answered the question “What can you express in poetry that you can’t in another literary or art form? Her response describes her use of working in rhyme: “You can write poetry about anything under the sun. What I love about poetry is how you can use poetic forms to shape ideas. I love working with rhyme, I don’t care whether it’s in fashion or not, I love the SOUND of words and the SHAPE of words on the page. Of course, when you’re using that method, there’s intensity to what you write. Poetry is about the compression of an idea. I guess some ideas are too big to put into one poem they should be in a novel. But they can become a BOOK of poems.”
Patience Agbabi is a performance poet, but also writes poems to be read and this collection is written in set in five sections covering race, sex, drugs, music and more. I’m not sure there was a consistent theme that was being repeated. Some of the poems seem to relate personal experiences (Foreign Exchange), others are about famous people of the past, Josephine Baker and Anne Boleyn included. I found the style of the poems to be different from section to section.
One section “Problem Pages” allows the author to act as an advice giver, providing suggestions to poets from the past, including William Shakespeare, John Milton Edna St. Vincent Millay and more. I think the tone here is humorous, but she does touch on issues of race as it relates to black poets using traditional white forms. Her response to the African American poet Gwendolyn Brooks, who writes that she has been accused of degrading the sonnet and not being black enough is: ‘Some say poetry+politics = propaganda. That black poet+sonnet = sell-out. I do hope your ‘propaganda’ sells out, continuing the long tradition of both political poetry and black poets engaging with white forms. It is literary skill that counts: always ask yourself, am I poet enough?’
How do these poems “write London?” I am trying to look at all the works we are interpreting in this class and I know this is a central issue. I think “Bloodshot Monochrome” tells the reader that London can be written by many types of writers drawing on the old and new in expressing their “Englishness”.
Two links including interviews with Patience Agbabi: